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So yeah. And Tanil's spotted now.
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Alright, let's do this.

I have to agree with Krodius, the characters tend to blend in with the background. Instead of making all the buildings random colors, maybe you could of made them monotone cool colors. It probably would of helped show that their city is in war.

However, I do appreciate the fact that you took the time to make the buildings unique from one another and from skyscrapers you usually see in life. 'Gratz on that one. Anyone could of made a quick skyline but you took the time to create each building individually.

As for the characters themselves, they look much neater than before. A couple mouths are missing, but it's not too distracting.

Another suggestion is probably make the logo a different color?

But what you really need to keep in mind is just draw what makes you happy. You can't please everyone.