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Junk Planet [P.8]

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It's so fluffy.


I just noticed that I drew these last three pages half-asleep at 4 in the morning, along with the next two I'll post. Sorry about the messiness. :iconallmyhateplz:
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I like where the story is going, although you can tell Bree is female, Auras' gender is a bit hard to tell, almost like androgyny. Adding a bit more "cutesy" features would help, little details can help a lot, such as adding a few scales on Bree to make her more "reptilian" or making the feathers on Aura's head look more feathery/fluffy because they look almost like quills (unless that was your intention) and the background could use a bit rocks here & there & not perfectly flat, maybe a shrub too. On the 2nd panel you can emphasize the cuteness of the doll Aura has for a sort of comedic effect.